It takes a lot of effort to write simply. Like anyone who has spent a life reading and writing, I can sometimes get ornate with my language. That’s when the red pen comes along and murders the wordy words. When I see a review like this I think, ‘Wow, this guy really gets it. He really understands me. That’s exactly what I intended with my labor.’ I’m sure that’s not what he intended but language is a negotiation between minds, not an exchange. Also, “have women sleep over”, cracks me up.